I'm a freelance computer tech so this is for my computer and networking services business. The symbols and tools represent software, hardware, and networking. The devices represent the range of devices I service. I need some graphic design critiques on this. This isn't my new logo design, so I hope I've learned some from my last one.
Update: added choice C... and now C2! Also did some typographic work on A and B. Hopefully the network cable bit in A is a bit more obvious now.
It would make it an icon logo and these can be exciting if you do it right. Someone told me logos come in icon style, text style, and illustration style.
I found a site that has a good gallery to study from...but you have to wait a few seconds for the flash banner to start going from image to image (don't click the banner, just let it start scrolling): [link]
I'd use a font like continuum [link] (it's one of my favorite high tech fonts) and put the entire name on one line (one line works better for web site title areas). I like the little icons in option B, they're more graphic design looking.
I like the placement of the second logo, but not the symbols. (although I feel as though the ones used for the A are a bit too detailed and it's also kind of hard to tell what some are)
I don't know what this is for, but may I make a suggestion? Assuming it's to do with computers, instead of the exclamation point and lightning bolt, try something along the lines of more widely recognized technology symbols. Power, wifi, folders, etc?
like this maybe? [link] or any rage of symbols your might see on a day to day basis while on your computer. Something that the average person would be able to identify your company with.
now this may be far off from what you want. I just thought I'd offer my opinion and advance though.
I found a site that has a good gallery to study from...but you have to wait a few seconds for the flash banner to start going from image to image (don't click the banner, just let it start scrolling): [link]
I don't know what this is for, but may I make a suggestion? Assuming it's to do with computers, instead of the exclamation point and lightning bolt, try something along the lines of more widely recognized technology symbols. Power, wifi, folders, etc?
like this maybe?
[link]
or any rage of symbols your might see on a day to day basis while on your computer. Something that the average person would be able to identify your company with.
now this may be far off from what you want. I just thought I'd offer my opinion and advance though.